To sugar, forever...

This is my first poem which is a sonnet?! Though its a poem of fourteen lines I haven't tried to follow any rules of sonnet (I din't know), but still it has a little bit of rhyme scheme in it! but most importantly it conveys the fresh feelings!!


To sugar, forever...

I never knew the sweetness of sugar
Until it dissolved in my heart;
My heart started pumping thy sweetness,
But finally busted for no fault.
Why didn’t I declare my love to thee?
For fear of rejection is a curse to me?
If I'm a dumb and thou art deaf?!
It was alright for love is blind,
But now it's my heart the real handicap,
Which suppressed passionately for thee.
Love was a sweet poison to me,
Which never killed, but became immortal!
But still thou art whose, Sweetness? My sugar;
As long there's sweetness, thou art a Sugar!

---AJAY

03 July, 2009

I have been inspired to write this after reading my friend’s,
Sonnet - 0.3 (- - -To Sugar).
She is the sole reason for me to write poems.

These are the feelings of a calm and shy man in love with a girl and is rejected for expressing his love too late as she’s already in love with another guy.